Developmental Chapter Edit

• What is this chapter's job in the book?
• What does the main character want, and what stops them?
• What has changed by the last page?
• Why would a reader turn to the next chapter?

Mark confusion, slow patches, great moments and missed opportunities.

Summarise the chapter's strengths first, then the three most important problems, with a suggestion for each.

• Rank the fixes from biggest to smallest
• Note any changes that ripple into other chapters